Saturday, September 24, 2011

Northumberland Today Friday September 23, 2011

Sometimes push comes to shove — back

October 2011
GRAFTON — Grafton resident Janet Irvine has written a book she hopes will be talked about — especially among teachers, parents and students.
When PUSH Comes To Shove Back tells the story of how Jeremy torments Matt, an easy target whose strategy for dealing with the situation is to avoid it as much as possible.
The tables turn when Jeremy becomes the target himself, of the school's biggest drug dealer. Circumstances throw Jeremy and Matt together against this student and the forces behind him, which threaten the larger student community.
Chapters alternate among Jeremy's and Matt's points of view and the traditional third-person telling, with prose written in short easy-to-read notebook-style chunks.
A talented former student of Irvine's from Cobourg District Collegiate Institute West, Jon Beasley, did the cover and inside illustrations. The cover draws on the love for military things, which one character has.
Irvine strove to develop each character fully, to explain the circumstances of his life. One of them, for example, has a father who is a bully.
"There's a tie-in between bullying and terrorism. They are defined almost the same way, except it's an individual doing it instead of a country or people," she said.
"I played with that whole theme of manipulation and bullying, and tried desperately to make the characters not black-and-white — because bullies are people and have problems and have backgrounds we don't know."
By contrast, the teachers and police officers in the story don't necessarily come through as heroes, since it is written from the point of view of a student and so many young people are predisposed to see them as adversarial to some degree.
"I dealt with a lot of kids in trouble, teaching special ed and in my role as acting vice-principal," Irvine says. "I was always involved in at-risk programs. You get an appreciation for some of the bullies who are around and why they are there."
Irvine has heard that as many as one in five students has to deal with a bullying situation of some degree, from the clumsy catcalling that can be laughed off to vicious, sustained campaigns that provoke suicide.

She called upon more than her own expertise to make the novel realistic, such as consulting her 13-year-old grandson. Her daughter, who has worked in group homes, had helpful advice.
"She would say, 'On page such-and-such, nobody says that,' and, 'These characters are not believable if you don't have them swearing.'
"I had a problem with that, because I wanted it to have a wide audience, but she was right."
Irvine even called the police to see how they might realistically handle the kind of situation that develops late in the book.
When PUSH Comes To Shove Back is self-published through AuthorHouse press.
"You get to the age where you are not interested in playing the publishing game," Irvine shrugged.
Though she never submitted it to a mainstream house for publication, she did enter the self-published book in the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Contest. She got some good reviews and had the excitement of watching it remain on the list through the semifinals and again through the quarterfinals.
As there were more than 10,000 entries from around the world and 250 left on the quarterfinals list, Irvine figures that puts her book in the top 5%.
This is not the first book Irvine has begun. She previously started work on a non-fiction book, a serious look at Alzheimer Disease and what it does to families.
"That is still in progress, but it takes a lot to write that kind of book when your family has been through it," she said.
"When I was teaching, I always thought I would like to write a novel. I started (When PUSH Comes To Shove Back) as a diversion from my real writing, and it just took off. I enjoyed the characters that began to develop, and it got finished."
She had three objectives with the book: she wanted to write something kids would want to read, something that would go off the book shelves into eager hands; she wanted to produce a well-written book; and she hoped the book would serve as a catalyst to spur adults and kids to talk about bullying.
While kids are averse to discussing their own experiences with bullying, Irvine explained, it might be helpful if parents and kids could discuss the situation in relation to a fictitious kid and what he could or should have done in different instances.
"That kind of conversation can be very helpful," she said.
"We see so many suicides and shoot-ups in the headlines, but there are an awful lot of kids who just suffer through the torment and don't talk about it. I wanted (the book) to be a reason to talk."
The result is a book that is enjoyable for young teens (though her 11-year-old granddaughter has read and enjoyed it), but her real target audience is teens, teachers and parents.
Irvine hopes to be able to do readings and workshops on the topic for both young people and adults. Meanwhile, copies of the book are available at a number of retail book stores (including The Avid Reader).
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Thursday, April 14, 2011

Welcome to When PUSH Comes to Shove Back!

The following is the pitch and the excerpt sent to Amazon to enter the 2011 Breakthrough Novel Award Contest. There were 5,000 young adult entries and 5, 000 general fiction entries. When Push Comes to Shove Back placed in the top 5%.

To visit the novel on Amazon, use the link below.




The Pitch
The underlying concept of the novel is that terrorism, creating terror in others, whether it is global or individual, is defined the same way, operates under the same rules, and results in the same victimization and fear.
Jeremy Wilson has little supervision, little regard for others, and no rules; he has spent most of his life being a terrorist, a bully. Matt Carver has lived most of his life as a target. He has poor self-concept, little confidence and few friends. The strength of these main characters is in their growth. As the novel progresses, Jeremy begins to understand the concept of trust and sees, for the first time, actions that are not motivated by self-interest; gradually, those influences begin to change him. Matt discovers opportunities to use the secret knowledge that he has and, ultimately, to lead a group of fellow students in a war against drug dealers who have infiltrated their school
The plot, most of which takes place during one day, supports the character development by throwing Jeremy and Matt together in an action-filled adventure when Jeremy suddenly becomes the target of a drug dealer who not only threatens him but also uses his sister to demand compliance. Alternating between the voices of Matt and Jeremy and that of a narrator, the novel provides insight into the lives of these two boys and the students who, in various ways, become part of the plot to overthrow the egocentric, vicious Tim Halliday who uses his charm, his looks, and the façade of a star athlete to win general admiration from all.
The pace is fast, the events are often unexpected, and the suspense makes “When PUSH Comes to Shove Back” a riveting read with details and situations that ring true in the lives of teenagers.

The Excerpt
CHAPTER 1
PUSH

Monday 8:45 a.m.

Terrorism: the calculated use of, or threat of, violence to inculcate fear, to coerce or to intimidate

Four boys quickly made their way down the crowded hallway, laughing and talking, just like everyone else on route to Monday morning classes. But they were on a different mission. It had to be timed right. It had to be fast and accurate. They had done it before.

They rounded the corner and moved into their final lap...fifty lockers away from their target. Change formation...forty lockers. Pick up speed...thirty lockers. Check for teachers...twenty. Get out of the way girl...ten. One on his right, one on his left, two at his back. Aaaaaand PUSH. Slam the door. Keep moving. Don’t look back. A direct hit.

They continued down the hall, high on the adrenaline of combat, trying to keep the bursts of laughter bottled up until they hit the stairwell, where they collapsed in fits of hysterics.

Inside the locker, Matt Carver waited. It was dark and he couldn’t breathe. His arm hurt and his leg was turned at a weird angle. He wished he could just disappear. Instead, he kicked at the door. On the third try, it flew open. The homework assignment he had been about to hand in was ripped and scrunched up on the floor. As he crawled out of his locker, he could hear girls giggling. Someone from across the hall yelled “Slam Dunk” and the laughter that followed told him that, as usual, there had been spectators.

His arm was scraped. He pulled his sweatshirt down over the blood oozing out. He picked his books up off the floor and retrieved what was left of his assignment. Without meeting anyone’s gaze, he slammed the misshapen locker door shut, forced his lock through the opening and went to class.

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